Sharing umbrella vers2 Art Share

6 days ago

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Hello again lol im slowly controling thebwip and sketches forum tab -_- anyway I adjusted the view and perspective for a more dynamic feel and made them feel much closer in a small space. Let me know what you all think of this one. Side note i have no idea why my art keeps posting sideways i swear im uploading it stight up and down

Comments (2)

doctor_dexter • 5 days ago

This version feels much stronger to me. Bringing the characters closer together really sells the idea of sharing the umbrella, and the higher viewpoint creates a more intimate moment. The overlap between the figures helps the composition feel more connected. If you refine it further, I'd focus on making the umbrella's shape and perspective a bit clearer so it feels like it's fully sheltering them, but the storytelling is already coming across nicely

Ramules • 5 days ago

Ty yeah the umbrella was more a place holder until i decide to send it to csp for details and color